tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post4340878871094994850..comments2022-11-13T08:26:12.620-05:00Comments on Feeble stabs at expression: The Modern HaikuDBtG5http://www.blogger.com/profile/05732866151579695717noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-28362805265350497232011-01-29T15:15:14.493-05:002011-01-29T15:15:14.493-05:00I apologize personally, and vow to think much hard...I apologize personally, and vow to think much harder about my haikus next time.Delthra Phicornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12291236760236746262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-89577393699567981912011-01-29T08:10:18.186-05:002011-01-29T08:10:18.186-05:00reading these comments
is fucking hilarious
i coul...reading these comments<br />is fucking hilarious<br />i could laugh all day<br /><br />anyways cool blog, ill follow and support!phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07246057389329283466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-53259516139364888962011-01-29T00:18:07.040-05:002011-01-29T00:18:07.040-05:00I'm not very poetry-savy, but I enjoy reading ...I'm not very poetry-savy, but I enjoy reading it. Followed.<br />http://zspneverydaysports.blogspot.com/ZSPNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03395933798579143548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-31518541524359900932011-01-28T21:50:01.978-05:002011-01-28T21:50:01.978-05:00count my syllables
i am now a great poet
just kidd...count my syllables<br />i am now a great poet<br />just kidding ha ha<br /><br />:Dthe420shack.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16527926134709277468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-66883550604298206112011-01-28T16:47:10.004-05:002011-01-28T16:47:10.004-05:00i really like reading haikus but for me my love fo...i really like reading haikus but for me my love for it should just stay there.gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12346803251805091350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-40734983240801291502011-01-28T15:08:53.910-05:002011-01-28T15:08:53.910-05:00Agreed, I like haikus but they can be absolutely h...Agreed, I like haikus but they can be absolutely horrendous sometimes. Some people just cram the right amount of syllables in and think they're awesome poets for that feat alone. <br /><br />Anyway, jumping on the bandwagon and adding a bad haiku I came up with right now:<br /><br />A tax return comes<br />I will buy Cataclysm<br />Fat nerd mode engagedSome dudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00635213380944086865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-54019107182431509322011-01-28T13:02:49.206-05:002011-01-28T13:02:49.206-05:00People with no sense for what art really is ruin i...People with no sense for what art really is ruin it. All. The. Time. I can get quite irritated by this myself. People being all like "LOOK WHAT I MADE", and then I just ask them if they think it's art. Answer? "Uhm..."Fanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17622179450555488552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-61771244943608270932011-01-28T12:32:48.210-05:002011-01-28T12:32:48.210-05:00as I lay, slowly
my thoughts and words turn to mat...as I lay, slowly<br />my thoughts and words turn to math<br />god, I am a nerd.<br /><br />I made that one in algebra class about 7 years ago.The Wyrdremhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09362292307574215496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-15509705018925220072011-01-28T11:21:26.939-05:002011-01-28T11:21:26.939-05:00Haikus can be awesome! I was introduced to them as...Haikus can be awesome! I was introduced to them as a kid, and they really helped me start developing a sense for syllabic rhythms and linguistic expression. What I don't like is older kids and young adults using them as a shortcut for their otherwise bullshit writing to have meaning.DBtG5https://www.blogger.com/profile/05732866151579695717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3714505203531546876.post-70538501563454676412011-01-28T10:07:04.208-05:002011-01-28T10:07:04.208-05:00Well, I like Haiku. I think the form translates so...Well, I like Haiku. I think the form translates some what poorly to English, but it can be fun working within strict parameters sometimes. I've taught haiku to 6th graders before too and everyone had fun (: Here's one I wrote:<br /><br />A duck among goose,<br />eating and flying with them.<br />Is it a real duck?Justin Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306681831958549752noreply@blogger.com